Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 10:10pm

Hi, Well, I really guess that there are two ways of looking at anything and this story gives us an interesting look at just how a deranged mind such as Lord Voldemort would have would see things. Harry, instead of being a very unique wizard now becomes some sort of mental monster that no one except he can see. I love this view of how things have gone on Voldemort's view point. Carol Layland

chonghhbas posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 7:08pm

Bravo! A marvelously written work that had me totally absorbed. very very nice, and paced just right. Great story if you're looking for a quick read. Good work!

Waywren Truesong posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 6:11pm

Perhaps it's only a mark of my cynicism toward the Wizarding World, but I've rather enjoyed reading about its doom. XD Perhaps because it wears such pretty green eyes, ne?

Celevon posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 9:55am

Different! I like it!

jimby posted a comment on Friday 8th January 2010 12:57pm

I love the title... But that might be because its the same name as one of the Pizzas I make at my work. Great story though :D

Orion posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 3:46am

Great! I've been reading HP fan fiction for a decade now, and it's very rare to find a story that is both VERY good and VERY original. I've never seen anything at all like this.

Thank you for writing, and Happy New Year.

senka posted a comment on Tuesday 5th January 2010 6:25pm

Truly amazing! I have never read a story with such an interesting twist!

Crys posted a comment on Monday 4th January 2010 5:39pm

Hmm. Interesting rewrite of history. No glaring holes in there.

Good idea of a flip of reality like that.

Thanks for sharing.

Musta posted a comment on Saturday 2nd January 2010 6:48pm

I guess I should say, that this was an excellent idea excellently executed...but I started to figure out the twist about two-thirds of the way through.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd January 2010 1:34am

- Spooky. I don't think I've ever seen anything like this one before. Thank you.

Jakh33 posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2009 12:36am

Wow. Great story, well written and the ending was excelent.

CheshireX posted a comment on Wednesday 30th December 2009 10:01am

Bloody brillant, and so orignal. I never would have even guessed the plot if I had tried for a million years! "Magic eating monster"

Longreach posted a comment on Wednesday 30th December 2009 1:06am

Wow... just wow.

I had chills, your work was literally that scary. 3 thumbs up (just let me go find a spare hand...)

dariuspeak posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 7:39am

I swear, from the point with the troll forward, I thought that Harry had some magical version of the Rinnegan.

jesterod posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 2:36am

AWESOME!!! this is a kick ass story thank you very much for the honor of letting us mere mortals to read it

Jarrod posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 12:14am

That was extraordinarily unique. I am really impressed. That was a lot of fun, not to mention good to see a quality writer out there plying trade.

Nicholas Baldwin posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 10:27pm

Nicely done, I like it. I like that it ends so soon in the canon series, but still lets you know what happened.

-- UrbanGhost

MagyarEagle posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 1:11pm

Ahh, very nice. Very nice indeed. An extremely well written work, that manages to capture uncertainty, and suspense along with a wonderful twist at the end. Great work!

Drake posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 12:18am

Wow. Very fascinating take on the Rowling's works, masterfully crafted within Canon yet so very different. It's not very often that we as the readers see different perspectives on the same story, how one take can differ so vastly from another.

If only we had another chapter of Culture Shock to make the day.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 11:39pm

Yes, i can see the inspirations from both classic sf stories here; and the whole makes for a very horrorific piece of work. I do like the way you made Voldemort a fighter against a far more insidious threar to the wizarding world and the horror of his losing adds to the effect. I suspect "Dear Rita" is going to be writing rather different stories from now on. I wonder just how long the wizarding world will survive before being taken over and, then, how much longer the non-magical world after them.