adafrog posted a comment on Thursday 18th July 2013 5:44am
Love the story. Thanks.
Man of Kent - Railwayman posted a comment on Tuesday 14th May 2013 12:48am
Most excellent an very different and original story
Finch1986 posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2011 12:51am
This is a great story; i hope you continue to update it!
lavigne109 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st February 2011 3:38pm
Snag posted a comment on Saturday 26th June 2010 9:38am
Darn. When I read the summary, I'd been hoping to see if you'd managed to mix in Terminators into the Wizarding World. Somewhere out there, there's a one-shot of Harry being rescued by a Terminator-Luna in the Chamber of Secrets. (I think she's supposed to be Cameron from the Sarah Conner Chronicles, but I couldn't say for sure. For that matter, it may be on this site and I just don't remember.)
Zooxle posted a comment on Saturday 19th June 2010 9:16pm
Awesome story, it reminds me a bit of the Starshard Cronicles's second book : Thief of Souls, where one character eats the souls of people and one way to see if someones soul has been eaten is to look into their eyes and see if it is missing. Also a bit of Legion in your story which is very cool as far as I'm concerned. I actually thought about Legion first then made the connection to the other book. Once again this story is very very good.
millimara posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 11:52pm
I have read this twice now and it still sends shivers down my spine and makes me look around the room. It's brilliant and scary as hell.
WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Friday 26th February 2010 3:50am
Scary stuff, this is. They're like, what, magic incarnate, or something like that?
Good story, though.
Jimbocous posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd February 2010 7:07am
ROFL. Nicely done! Would've made a great Twilight Zone episode ....
71_scorpio posted a comment on Monday 15th February 2010 5:46am
Oh wow! How delightfully and wonderfully creepy! And so perfect that we don't even know just what this magic-eating monster really is. *wicked grin* It also puts a new slant on why the Dursley's hate/fear Harry as "unnatural". They probably fgured out he was not human even if they had no magic to drain/taint/consume...
Anansii posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 9:23am
Hmm... just a hit of HP Lovecraft there, too... Well done!
Vukk posted a comment on Saturday 23rd January 2010 12:39pm
This is a...odd story. Kinda curious as what you would have said caused it, aliens, magic, god...
loatroll posted a comment on Friday 22nd January 2010 3:11am
Bwahahahah loved the ending! Thanks for the excellent read! I love how this could quite easily be true.
wuoreb posted a comment on Tuesday 19th January 2010 2:33am
That is very very creepy. Wow.
gtg485w posted a comment on Monday 18th January 2010 2:54am
This is awesome. It deserves to be made into a horror movie.
And it should end somehow with the green eyes of all the other corrupted glowing in the darkness of the hall.
TheNekoWithWings posted a comment on Friday 15th January 2010 3:41am
Oh. My. Gosh. That's.... certainly an interesting take on the series. Thumbs-up!
rey_naldo posted a comment on Thursday 14th January 2010 5:27am
scary, omg somebody stop that monster...
great fic i love it will you write another?
Anthony May posted a comment on Wednesday 13th January 2010 10:43pm
That was a lot of fun. Thank you for your story. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
bannanacupcakes posted a comment on Wednesday 13th January 2010 1:54pm
Very creepy :).
All the spelling and grammar was correct as far as I could tell.
What happened next? Or does the story end here?
winoniel posted a comment on Wednesday 13th January 2010 4:59am
Wow! What a powerful story! I actually like the demonic Harry you present, and the idea of Voldemort as the medium of delievery of the story is really inventive. Well done.