havefeith posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2016 7:35pm

Just out of curiosity, is there going to be any more of this? It's a rather good read, for the most part.

Jonez227 posted a comment on Saturday 16th June 2012 5:15pm

please make another chapter of this. even if the next chapter is the end of the story, please make one. it's so rare of me to see an evil!harry fic and actually like it like i do yours.

Fireshadow277 posted a comment on Friday 30th March 2012 11:55pm

Nice very nice

GeorgeTobor posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2011 1:21am

I love it when death eaters get to die like they should!

JKR did not let the "light" fight right!

Good does not say to evil, "stop and say sorry" but destroys evil!

JKR is a fool in many ways, still HP is interesting....

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 23rd September 2011 1:00am

This is a good story, I don't care for the underage sex

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 23rd September 2011 12:30am

This is a good story

I don't care for Harry and Amanda having sex at 11, but I won't say it's unrealistic since I know better. In some places writing underage sex story is illegal, so I am always surprise when I read a person have sex who is younger then 16

yoh_askura posted a comment on Sunday 18th September 2011 11:01am

fucking awesome especially how you portray death and the maturity of harry and amanda i don't care much for the sex but i love the little quips they share regarding sex hopefully you will continue this as well as something grim this way comes

hula_gal13 posted a comment on Monday 16th May 2011 3:43am

wish u would write more

Tenchifew posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd February 2011 6:46pm

Thank you for this great story! Seldom was an evil Harry so good.

thaumologist posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd February 2011 12:43am

This is still awesome, and I really do wish you'd write more of it - a ature but well written HP story is often hard to find.


DFTBA
C

azrael3 posted a comment on Sunday 6th February 2011 4:13am

brilliant just brilliant

Jonez227 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th January 2011 10:10pm

i really like your interpretation of death and amanda in this story. i've read something grim this way comes and loved that. this darker story is just as good. while i hope you finish Soemthign Grim first, i would love to see another chapter of this story. sometimes, you just have to like a very dark and evil harry, and this is one of those times.

solitare99 posted a comment on Monday 29th November 2010 4:37pm

How do Harry and Amanda have control over death in this fic?
Very good! I like this story much better than your other Harry and Mandy fic, probably because Harry is way cooler and there are no annoying supporting characters.

mcgurrin posted a comment on Friday 26th November 2010 5:42pm

I like it and hope this is eventually continued maybe even with an adults only version.

mcgurrin posted a comment on Friday 26th November 2010 4:46am

I like it and would be interested in seeing this continued.

thaumologist posted a comment on Thursday 4th November 2010 3:02pm

This is awesome! I know it would be hard to extend, but what you have here is a really nicely laid out oneshot. I liked something grim, but much preferred this - SG seemed just a bit too fantastical, whereas this is more serious.

You have very few spelling/grammar errors, and the few I did spot didn't detract from your writing, so suffice to say:
Awesome work, please keep it up

C

Elia950 posted a comment on Sunday 24th October 2010 4:43pm

You know.. i doesn't matter how many times i read this story.. i always like it *_*

Is it there a chance of this becoming a full story and not just a one shot?

kyuubilordofthe9 posted a comment on Saturday 25th September 2010 11:57am

A very interesting take on the concept of death. One wonders where they came by such a power... And I have to ask, what exactly is a form-seven teacher? I've never heard of it before.

peter posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 4:26am

any thoughts about using any of the other literary versions of death? It would be interesting to have discworld's DEATH, or his granddaughter be the one involved.

Tiberianfest posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 11:47pm

Loved the story well told with a heavy feel to it that made me just want to keep reading and love the way you portrayed death as the"wind" thing from FD