Culture Shock
Homeward Bound
By Ruskbyte
Reviews
tula posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 8:29am for Homeward Bound
great new fic so far.
its truly a pleasure to see you return to the site.
Do you have any set plans on how far you want to take this story HP canon wise? Because as far as i can see this Harry should be done with quite strong compared to the normal people on earth (in more ways than one).
Adrian R Brown posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 8:13am for Homeward Bound
Another great chapter. A very fresh and unique crossover. Can't wait to read more!
Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 7:19am for Homeward Bound
Have you given any thought to what the pairing of this will end up as? Or it will be a /Multi fic?
Thanks for sharing this fic :D The ship names are hilarious, and so far, I've not had any trouble following the fic, despite not knowing more than the wiki info on The Culture.
Great job :)
Chris
Bedrup posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 7:13am for Homeward Bound
Liking this more and more
James Barber posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 6:14am for Homeward Bound
Great update! so he heading back to the backwater primitive planet of his birth, and I take it he didnt get laid they just fooled around rubbing it other more or less. cuddling I guess you could call it. He ought to have a relationship with his guardian sma, I think they would be good for each other.
DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 5:33am for Homeward Bound
I know nothing about the 'culture', but I'm curious, if Harry is old enogh for serious sex play, why they don't use artificial insemenation to make a bunch of little Harry and Harriets
"T"
gallandro_83 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 5:03am for Homeward Bound
another great chapter,
i am not really sure how your going to fit this series through the entire scope of the harry potter novels but as someone who has followed your stories since your wonderful OOtP i can't wait to see how its done I am surprised though that with a course of astronomy on the hogwarts curriculim and the possible importance of it through all the fields of magic that Dumbledoor is so dismisive of harry being in outerspace (although he probably missed the fact that the "muggles" have sent a man to the moon) I mean plenty of observable bodies in our own solar system have the different occilations relative to the planet that Dumbledoor observed (satelites most definetly)
anyway just wanted to say thankx for another great chapter in another great story I hope to read more soon
gallandro
ps-- I realize it is probably more than abandoned but will you ever talk about what went on in that first chapter of the shattering of souls, personally i still think we were seeing harry potter's soul finding its way into draco's comatose body
Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 4:46am for Homeward Bound
Another interesting chapter.
One thought jumped out at me immediately: Harry is wrong if he thinks that being on Earth will free him from manipulative old coots. He will just be swapping an AI for a flesh and blood old coot. :-p
Okay... so the Drone has been authorised to use maximum force against threats. In this context, I suspect that is sufficient firepower to flatten a city. Life at Hogwarts is about to get... interesting. At least we know what is going to happen to the Troll, Malfoy... and possibly Snape too (what would be the Culture's view of a telepathic intrusion?).
I am also still somewhat disappointed at Dumbledore's inability to draw inferrences from the information supplied by his tracking and monitoring devices. Still, I cannot entirely blame him. Even a Muggle would initially suspect a malfuction of some kind. I mean... in space? How many light years away?
I'm still looking forward to the arrival at Hogwarts. It is at that point that things will really take off.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 9:08am for Homeward Bound