Patches posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 12:44am

OK! Harry is making good use of his time. He is preparing weapons for his clone army! He is taking good care of himself physically and extending his knowledge magically. He is reaching out to people to expand his area of influence. He is trying to find new allies even in Slytherin! He made great points with the goblins! He is building his resistance to Voldemort by gaining support througout the wizarding world. Can't hur, might help! Way to go. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 10:02pm

OK. A difficult chapter. To Plan, to write, to keep track of all the inuendoes. The personallity changes in Harry are difficult to understand until reminded about the "other Harry" and his reactions. I am so glad Draco is not going to get off scot-free. Also ditto Crabbe and Goyle. Snape's apology was what Harry said. "An insensire apology is not apology at all"! A good chapter though. Thanks for writing. pms

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 9:09pm

The idea of the fight, Harry in diguise, was terrific.

But the charmed assasin's dagger was a world class plot device.

Very well done.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 7:43pm

Well done. I'm glad people are talking and Dumbledore has talke Amelia into not arresting Harry outright. It is good that Luicius is out of the picture plus Voldemort's henchmen are 10 less including some of his best Death Eaters. I'm glad Harry was able to save Hermione this time. It is great he and Ron talked about Harry and Hermione being a couple instead of Ron/Hermione. It is a much better fit anyway. I have a little problem with Luna/Ginny but that is just me. It does add a little surprise to the story. I think it is hilarious that Harry got interuppted in his shower by Luna and Hermione has to recue Harry. That is great. I love these little surprises. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 5:38pm

Wow! That was painful for everyone involved. Especially Hermione. At least Malfoy senior is out of the picture. And Harry rescued Hermione and saved her like again in the process. Now all they have to do is survive the inquisision from the ministry over Harry breaking all of Draco's fingers and dislocating his shoulders in front of the whole student body of Hogwarts.

I want to see how you handle this! Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 3:33pm

Bad part of story. And it's going to get worse, right? Ok, on to Harry's rescue. Please make it swift and I hope the drones can protect Hermione's parents.
Looking forward to the resolution of this situation.

Thanks for writing, pms

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 2:03pm

The conversation between Harry and Dumbledore was an exercise in brilliance. Compelling writing.

Though not direct at all, I just feel like Harry and Hermione are getting closer to an established relationship.

Silencing Ron is always fun. Somethings the boy just refuses to learn.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 8:03am

This is one of the best chapters I have read used to cause Harry to go off and then return ready to open up more with his friends and trust Hermione's advice.

I believe that will be the outcome of your fine chapter here.

Every scene was gripping. Every scene was extremely well written.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 7:04am

I like this chapter. I hope Harry & Dumbledore can mend their fences. I'm glad someone came up with a way to styfle Ron! Very good. I look forward to more chapters. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 5:03am

That went well. Harry learned things about himself he needed to know. His friends stayed loyal even though his fight with Hermione caused them all problems the subsequent discussion with Dumbledore, Snape and Rhys went very well. Dumbledore did learn some things. Snape has been suspended. I think this is very good the way you presented the information.
Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 2:44am

Good chapter. I am so glad that Severus finally got told off by Dumbledore about his attitude toward Harry. I like the growing relationship between Harry and Hermione. The scene with Voldemort was very good. I look forward to more. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 12:44am

Harry is taking over control of his life and helping others along the way. I like the way he and Hermione are progressing. I look forward to more.

Thanks for writing. pms

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 5:28pm

The discussion about Harry by the entire Order was amazing.

How can Snape be so stupid? (This question is rhetorical, not like the recently dispparaged line of review questions.)

Excellent work.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 2:16pm

This is a very unique way to develop the Harry/Hermione relationship.

It's compelling and enthralling.

Great story.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 1:42pm

I always love it when there's hope for Harry romantically.

You have created a masterful time travel technology/methodology here.

Just brilliant.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 1:01pm

I'd forgotten how much entertainment the tribbles were . . .

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 12:44pm

Now Harry's extreme anger at Dumbledore makes more sense. Idealism can be a great thing in peace time and more than tragic in times of war.

Clever, clever, CLEVER beyond clever twists and fabrications of a future knowledge back to save the day.

Well done.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 10:55am

The story build up is gripping. The opportunity for speculation ripe.

What a fine story you're weaving here.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 10:03am

The conversation with Dumbledore was brisk, stimulating, and delightfully confusing and tantalizing.

But the bit about the new fued with Snape at the end is compelling.

Great writing.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 9:40am

I cannot wait to see how you make this work. Other Harrys-coming-back have to be so careful not to upset the timeline, and not to let people know he is time travelling.

Your Harry here seems to barely care that he's giving off broad hints that he knows the future.

Fascinating.