mastapsi posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 11:41pm

It's a great story, but you need to update it.

Or at least let us know if your still alive and working on it, the suspense is killer.

Rovias05 posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 9:22pm

Good stuff, but needs to be updated a bit. I find I'm really coming to like Harry's sense of humor, combined with Father's. Wonder how Dumbledore gets rid of the tribbles? I suppose you could set them on fire or feed them poison. Vanishing spells, mayhaps? Plasma rifles and Killing Curses work too, though. Father's GM fields should be able to fend off part of the problem. Now I'm rambling. Later.

jessie179 posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2006 3:19pm

I like it so far.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Sunday 18th June 2006 3:33pm

I am curious about something... When I had originally read this story I thought there had been something like 33 Chapters to the story ... and yet now there is only 18 and hasn't been updated since then end of March 2006 of which it is the same as what is on FFN which was last updated in July of 2005

Have you abandoned this story? I know that real life tends to get in the way of great writing ... just look at my work! *LOL*

If it is editing or beta work that you need let me know I will be more than happy to help you in any way I can. I am in the process of organizing my time more so that I have sufficient time to write as well as going back to beta work.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, it has always been a refreshing change from most stories out there and being the die-hard Harry and Hermione shipper that I am love that aspect of it... it also is a very unique twist on the 2nd chance stories that are out there...

Please let me know if there is anything I can do to help, I hope life is treating you well

As Always,
Muirnin - Muirnin.cocan@gmail.com

Damn the Canon, Full steam ahead HMS Harmony (Pumpkin pie on the menu for dessert!)

evilclone from ff.net posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2006 10:47pm

I was directed here by S’TarKan, he explained to me that this might be a good way to get into contact with you... If you do read this please could you contact me on the Email i have provided.

I would like to discuss the possible use of some of the technology you are using, including most importantly the Father unit, and the drones, they would be a huge part in my story...

Please, contact me as soon as you can, mike

grendell posted a comment on Thursday 15th June 2006 9:01pm

Ive just found your story and WOW! its great! you've realy thought it out. Only one thing ... TRIBBLES !!!! how are you going to get out of this one ! I meen , no transporter tech. and no Klingon ships around. so how? thru father to Moldyshorts? I cannt wait to see. Keep up the great writing.

Hannah3 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th June 2006 2:48pm

As they exited, Harry could here the students erupting into hushed whispers.

I noticed in this sentence that you used the wrong 'here.' You have 'here' and it should be 'hear'. Just a grammatical error, and not that major of one. Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Katherine posted a comment on Saturday 3rd June 2006 1:14pm

I was wondering if Harry could be a ruthless bastard. When he has to go up before the board of Governors and the Wizengamot for his trial. Force them to see that this is war. In war you have to be as ruthless as the enemy if you want your side to win. If you want to protect your women and children. If Harry can’t convince the jury/ judges with words he will have to show them with actions. Have Harry have his drones break in to the courtroom only have them take the faces of known death eaters and the children of the judges. Have the death eater look-a-like drones start to torture and rape the look-a-like children right there in front of them. Harry can tell them he can’t do anything to stop them cause that’s what they want. The lives of the death eaters are more important than the safety, health, and emotional and physical well being of their children. If this display won’t make them see Harry’s side nothing will. And be sure to have Harry slip in that Voldemort will attack Hogwarts and when he does he’ll leave the protection of everyone to only a hand full of teachers who while will try there best against the death eaters can’t beat the superior numbers, and with only light spells too.

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 1st June 2006 12:54pm

So, are we going to be getting an update anytime soon? We all are waitng patiently, albeit anxiously, for the next installment. Really hop that you haven't given up on us!

Evan posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2006 2:26pm

I like the reference to "Asterix and the Chieftain's Shield"

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 5:26pm

Love the story the first time, second, third and not forth, still waiting for chapter 19 though.

ZachShanks posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 12:46pm

I read this storie when it was on fanfic and was wondering if you were planing on finishing it here? If so i would love to finish it.

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2006 11:12pm

Hiya Rusk!

Hope everything is well. Are you planning on posting the next chapter to this fic anytime soon? You were doing so well in getting caught up with the postings... I must say, BC is by far and large my most favorite HP fanfic on the web, and believe me, I've read A LOT! Thanks for the outstanding story and keep up the great work!

David Thacker posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 3:01am

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Darrell2 posted a comment on Friday 7th April 2006 8:32am

first thing I rreally have to say is ... Live Long And Prosper, my friend. It is good to see those furry balls of fluff once more. I really hope that you update this story soon, as the story is an interesting one. Kepp up the good work.

Lufio posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 1:14pm

"Now, fifteen years before Voldemort comes up with the concept, there isn't a person, artefact or spell on the planet that can follow Father."
- I think "Voldemort" in this instance should be changed to "Luna" or "Doc". Luna is the one who created Gatekeepers, not Voldemort. She's the only who knows how GM works.

"Same principal."
- This one should be "principle" rather than "principal".

Tildessmoo posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 11:58am

"'Actually, bats can see perfectly fine,' commented Luna, still staring at the bats above. 'The problem is, they fly around during the night and can't see all that well in the dark.'" The really weird part is, she's right. Of course, sonar makes up for a lot.

"By now Harry had devoured several fried eggs, sunny side up, enough rashers of bacon to make half a pig, two slices of buttered toast, and enough guava juice for the giant squid to swim in. Even more amazing was that he was not showing any sign of slowing down or stopping." Yet even more amazing still was that he managed to get his hands on guava juice at all.

And, well, I'm afraid we're just going to have to tell the professors that you've contracted laryngitis, Ron...

In other words, loved, laughed, and moving on to the next chapter!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 3rd April 2006 5:48am

Fascinating initial revelation of how you will have Harry, et al gain control of the Daily Prophet.

Harry and Dumbledore seem to be getting a little closer. That alliance, even under strained conditions, makes me hopeful.

Great tale.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 8:15pm

Most interesting Snape-apology session.

If Harry isn't treated better than that at his meeting with the Board, it will be a travesty of justice.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 7:25am

This was one of the better Harry-recovering-from-his-first-kill(s) scene.

The Ron-and-Harry chat, the Hermione-and-Harry chat, and the Hermione-and-Ron chat after the H-and-H chat were very well written.