Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 4:42pm

LOL! Loved _this_ cliffhanger! I'm sure it will all work out innocently, but...

Liked the aftermath of the battle (good battle, too). The effect on Harry is great.

Glad you're giving us snippets of other action, too - Dumbledore and the Order, and Voldemort. Glad the Twins are with Harry.

BTW, I keep forgetting -- your Luna is wonderful!!!! Absolutely wonderful.

And thanks for updating so quickly!

Tom A.

jake m posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 4:26pm

okay........wierded out man......get luna outa thr and hermoine into the shower lol

Davideg posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 3:01pm

this is a realy great story keep up the great work

Stone Cold posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 12:01pm

So, obviously you're still alive and all. But it is troubling that the last update to the story on FF.net was in July of 05. Is there more to the story that wasn't posted there?

Or is this a horrible horrible tease?

I hope that we get more than the posted 18 parts, it IS a very good story.

Aurilia posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 1:35am

Horay for Power-Trip!Harry! And I almost feel sorry for Lucius. Almost.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 11:54pm

Poor Ron. Eventually he may learn when to keep his mouth shut...

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 10:35pm

LMAO and ROTFL and I can't breathe.

She really SLAPPED him. SQUEE!!!!!!!

Alorkin posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:09pm

I like it! Now that I have finished reading the first 14 chapters, I'd like to review.
The dark (but not necessarily evil) Harry is a refreshing twist. As a former soldier, I understand that, while ugly, nasty, wrong, bad, terrible, and probably criminal, it is often necessary to fight terorists with the same weapon they use...TERROR.
While I really don't care for 'SuperHarry!' stories, I feel this one has great potential. Harry is not suprepowered, he is merely using advanced technology. Better tools.
Heinlein says 'Sufficently advanced technology as indistinguishable from magic.'
Harry is driven by the memories he has of his friends fate, along with that of the wizarding world. He is still wracked with guilt for his actions and those he percieves as his, but all the same, he is willing to get ugly as needed. JKR was really cruel to put the destiny of a fickle, uncaring population of idiots in the hands of a young man.
Your explainations are very well written, your descriptions a bit lacking, and dialogue sounds like real people are speaking. Over all, well done. I have gotten several interesting ideas for my ilustrations. Mayhaps I can do some from this story.
Harry's treatment of the ferret and his bookends is brilliant. I cannot wait to find out how nasty he is when he deals with Lucky Lucy and gang. Please update this soon. Alorkin

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:08pm

Mmm... Wormtail. I always like it when he gets mentioned.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 7:08pm

What else can I say? I am really enjoying this tale, and hope it continues being all that it has been. Funny, thought-provoking, enjoyable. Keep up the good work!

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 6:30pm

Brilliant.

Bloody perfectly brilliant.

Fan-bloody-tastic.

I love it when the twins are allowed to build dangerous things. I love it even more when they build things for Harry.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 5:38pm

Giggle.

So, Harry's bringing in the twins, is he? Kickass.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 5:01pm

Brilliant!

Snape deserved so much more than that. I applaud Harry's sense of control.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 4:36pm

oooooh!

What's he gonna do to Snape?

Squee!

I love power-trip!Harry!

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 4:13pm

ROTFL!

Fan-fucking-tastic!

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 3:57pm

Squeeing giggle.

Mars Bars? Snicker.

Lovin' it!

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 3:48pm

I'm really glad there's another chapter, otherwise I would have been forced to unleash the assassin bunnies.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 3:36pm

Interesting.

Veeeeeeeeery interesting.

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 3:27pm

The universe sneezed.

This is now my all-time favorite line. Interesting take on time-travel fics. I like how you're telling it from where Book 5 left off, instead of starting at some point in the distant future and following the older Harry back.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 8:09am

You are evil! Leaving a cliffhanger there!

Great chapter. Excellent build up, and tension.

I'm glad of Harry's reaction to his torchure of Draco. Not that Draco didn't deserve it.

Great story. Eagerly waiting the next thrilling installment!

Tom A.