By Ruskbyte
Reviews
Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Tuesday 26th April 2011 7:57pm
I just found this story and I have to say..... this is AWESOME!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA!!!! The way that Freddy and Harry interact is brilliant. I only wish that Harry could extract a little bit of control over him just to scare the shit out him but i'm sure you have alot planned. Keep it up dude this story rocks!!
KenF posted a comment on Monday 25th April 2011 5:02pm
You're teasing us with Umbridge, aren't you?
midevildle posted a comment on Monday 25th April 2011 8:20am
The very first fanfiction I ever read was your Order of the Phoenix way back in the day when you had just started it. And now, even as my tastes have changed (not sure I would have started your OotP just because it H/G these days) still now I look forward to your updates because you continue to deliver with each and every one.
Thanks for continuing to spin out pure gold.
rustymotion posted a comment on Sunday 24th April 2011 8:42pm
hurry the heck up your shit is golden bro! Love the interaction between freddy and harry.
brad posted a comment on Sunday 24th April 2011 1:45am
> Ordinarily he would have felt comforted by the attention, considering how bad he felt, but her repeated suggestions to skip breakfast, in leau of a visit to Madam Pomfrey, were fast beginning to get on his nerves.
NOOOOOOO!!! Not Hermione!!!! Don't you DARE!!
> "I’m honestly beginning to hate this place," he grumbled, pushing his plate away.
What, now the entire castle is on Freddy's list?
I'm going to be a nervous wreck by the time you finish this story.
It's amazing when I think back at how I thought this would be a simple Harry-gets-revenge story with most of the action happening in his nightmares. Instead you have me constantly on edge over both (a) who's going NOT HERMIONE to be killed next, and (b) what's going to happen in the real world. That dream of Seamus's may be apt; how much more death will it take for the mob to start baying for Harry's blood, purely on circumstantial evidence? As it is I quite agree with his thoughts that Umbridge and Fudge are poised to blame him for everything anyway (sadly this is exactly the sort of people they were in the canon, you're using that/them very well).
Damn it Harry. Confide (more) in Hermione. While you're waiting for that research to come back tell her what's happening. After reading this chapter I wanted very much to have her (and Ron, no doubt) taken into Harry's confidence. And for Hermione to hit on the idea - "well, Harry, while we're waiting for mum and dad to get back to us, I think you should spend the whole day, and certainly just before you go to sleep ... HATING VOLDEMORT. The dark lord who's invading your thoughts. The bastiche who killed your parents." Hermione would hopefully have the brains to get Harry to get some good use out of Freddy while they're working in parallel on removing Kreuger entirely.
As long as she doesn't upset Harry in the process ...
NOT HERMIONE!!!!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 23rd April 2011 10:55pm
Man, that's quite the nasty set of dreams, there. I wonder if Severus, when he arrives at the afterlife, will appreciate just what he's released on Hogwarts and the wizarding world. It's sad, really, that the wizarding world has kept itself ignorant; ignorance isn't bliss, it's danger that you don't know about and which can kill you totally unexpectedly. The wizards would have even more problems if/when non-magical terrorists set off a nuke or a "dirty bomb" in London and Diagon Alley was affected.
Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 23rd April 2011 8:45pm
Very nicely done once again, poor old Seamus.
Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 23rd April 2011 7:34pm
Well written chapter
brad posted a comment on Thursday 21st April 2011 12:10pm
Oh wow. I was thinking this would be a straight one-track sort of story, with Freddy taking people out in dreams. My biggest fear was that he'd rustle up Hermione as someone whom Harry had 'hated' in that moment of anger we'd seen, before Harry twigged what was happening.
But now you have Snape surviving his first encounter, and being given a clue that it's a student who is providing Freddy's base of operations. And had Snape seen a glimpse of Harry's freddy-related dreamscape in an earlier Ligilimency 'lesson'?
Oh dear. Now there's two tracks to this story, with the addition of Snape snooping during the daytime, a real risk to Harry's life. This story has now had it's creative complexity doubled!
Your having Snape assault Harry in this chapter was marvellously effective. You hid the details from us, but simply having Harry grow more and more angry afterwards (I'd been worried he simply would never know what Snape had done) worked very nicely.
Using Lily in Snape's dream was a nice application of the HP canon too.
Great story so far! (Even if the actual violence is something I try to read very fast. :-))
Ian Drimes posted a comment on Tuesday 19th April 2011 5:40am
Enjoying the story alot. Keep it up!
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Monday 18th April 2011 5:02pm
Kudos for the fate of Snape. The Breakfast will be lighter and heavier at the same time. How long before Umbridge(sp?) has a run in with dear Freddy, maybe within a kitten-shelter?
Anyway, thanks for shahring.
Pirazy posted a comment on Sunday 17th April 2011 5:01pm
Awesome chapter, although I'm a little disappointed that you didn't have Freddy use Lily's form to mindfuck Severus even more. After all, the amount of guilt he carries over causing her death should give Freddy plenty of ammo to hurt him with.
duke_bonez posted a comment on Sunday 17th April 2011 12:23am
Woah. Yeah. I like this. I was a little worried that Freddy's hobby would kill this for me, I tend to have a limited tolerance for torture and butchery - kills lots of horror movies for me =[, but this is impressive and I honestly want to know what will happen next.
I wonder of dear Voldemort is going to stumble into Freddy Krueger one of these nights, I mean he has got to be annoyed that he can't get through to Harry anymore...
Awesome.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 16th April 2011 11:01pm
*snicker* Oh, dear, Severus Snape is just starting to realize what he's unleashed but hasn't yet "connected" the dots to understand just what his extreme error was. I rather expect Freddy to finish him and then "visit" Tom before departing back to strictly the dream plane. This could be a subtly horrid twist on "the power he knows not".
dpwheels57 posted a comment on Saturday 16th April 2011 10:31pm
Just way f****ng cool. Been a long time since I've seen Freddy, but you a doing a good job. Story line is flowing well. Can't wait to see what happens when you get to "hem-hem". You're doing a good job at keeping me guessing who's next.
Richard Griffin posted a comment on Saturday 16th April 2011 9:02pm
interesting turn of events nice tosee Draco and Snape gitting some of thir shit back in spades
Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 16th April 2011 8:10pm
Well written chapter
It very stupid that Snape was Harry's representative, Harry's representative should had been his McGonagall. McGonagall is Harry's head of house and it her job to protect everyone in that house
Tumshie posted a comment on Friday 15th April 2011 2:22pm
Excellently written, but roll call not role call, roll = list, role = a part in a play etc.
00_Knight posted a comment on Thursday 14th April 2011 8:49am
Hmmm, that was sadistic, horrifying, and totally uncalled for! Draco's "wet dream" was TMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As for the rest, it was great! Though it'll be interesting who gets it next.
Ossindie posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 12:54am