Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 7:04am

Some folks NEVER learn. (Those that subscribe to the terrorist manifesto ae often among those that fall into that category.) You have Harry Potter (simply the most powerful mage EVER, and that *includes* Merlin), Hermione Granger (the first practicing Master Enchantress since Morgana LeFey), Fred and George Weasley (the first true Technomages), Ginevra and Neville Longbottom, along with Nymphadora and Remus Lupin (all former Master Aurors, and in Remus' case, the first lycanthrope Auror, and then the first lycanthrope Master Auror) and that's just the first team. You then have Ron Weasley (another former Master Auror, and multiple QWC Winning Captain), William and Charles Weasley (Bill Weasley is the first non-goblin to head Gringott's Curse-Breaking Division), and, lastly, but far from leastly, Luna Lovegood-Potter (while primarily known as a reporter, editor, and chairman of Potter Communications, Mrs. Potter is also both a Seer and the first Hermione-trained Enchantress; she followed her husband as Head of Gryffindor House, and then Hermione as Headmistress when Harry declined the position), all *coming off the bench*. (Indeed; that is a VERY deep bench.)

Ishtar posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2005 3:40pm

Hee hee! This is one of my favorite stories ever. I keep coming back to it. Glad to see it here.

Tom A. posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 4:12pm

That was good. Thank you for writing.

I did think of the robot version of the Terminator. Rather impressive, actually.

Good imagination. Good execution.

Tom A.

Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 2:51am

Thank you for a most enjoyable laugh filled hour.

shadowmist posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 1:12am

Sequel? Please? This has got to be one of the best stories i've read! You're stories are all good but most of them are unfinished or seem like it.... Can you keep going with this one cause its really really really good!

Jeconais posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 10:38am

Extremely enjoyable, and some really interesting ideas. I think that's what I like about your stories the most - the way some of it is so far out there you need a telescope to see it.

I like the concept of spells evolving as language does - it gives credence to the idea that spells are nothing more than channels for desire.

The feeling of disbelief in the air when the Death Munchers were rounding up the villages was very well done.

Finally, I think you ended it just at the right moment - enough to close most major questions, and while it leaves a faint pang for more, I don't think more is actually needed.

Thanks for the entertainment.

Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 7:24am

i was wondering if you would do a sequal to this story, it would be pretty interesting to see what things that they would do.