Trixtor posted a comment on Monday 20th January 2014 6:57am

Gam Zeh Ya'avor.

A fitting end.

You're a really damn good writer, you know that?

Tzu Con posted a comment on Wednesday 19th January 2011 6:27pm

Hey,

I really like this story, it's a super-Harry yet enough of H/Hr to have a subtile fluff in it.

I'm curious why you haven't added the 5th chapter on this site, but left it on FF.net? I quite like chapter 5, and even though you consider it the start of the next story arc others might be interested in reading it. It could always be an omake or outtake?

Thanks, and keep writing!

delrusant posted a comment on Tuesday 21st September 2010 6:47pm

What a story, for once a pretty slytherin Voldemort where he use the appearance of someone the light trust to take a foothold into a fight. The explanation, magic intervention we could call it was well written and the last wit about quiditch was well placed.

thanks for the story.

nomad062 posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2009 8:41pm

Bravo! One of the coolest final battle shorts I've read. Well Done!

Wolf470 posted a comment on Saturday 14th November 2009 11:21pm

Well done. I just read the whole thing and I think you did great. Please continue writing

goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2008 8:45am

Lol! I hadn't read this yet because it sounds like a horror worthy of... Kafkaexmachina... or bil or something. In fact it was but it reminded me more of some others.

I really liked it and will probably go back to it in the future.

riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 6th August 2008 4:36pm

This is an interesting story, I thought that Voldemort can't be killed by anyone but Harry. But then again there nothing saying that this story is following the prophecy

Ceres posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 7:09pm

i love the last bit he's worried about a bloody quidditch match between slytherin....wait does that mean his "understanding" moment took a whole bloody month dang. well thought i would say that. its not much of a harry hermione fic though the only thing that was pointed toward it is when moldyshorts said something about them sleeping. idk thought i would say it. um please do put the 5th part up soon. Please & thankyou

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 1:02am

This is a good story. I really enjoyed it immensely. I may have reviewed it a long time ago but even so I really liked it. I really enjoy all your stories. I look forward to more of Culture Shock! That one is really different. Thank you for sharing your tallent. pms

Aelita posted a comment on Friday 18th April 2008 6:23pm

Ummmmmmmmmm can you post the fifth story arc just for fun? You know for those that are curious? PLEASE!

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Saturday 12th April 2008 7:46pm

So, what's the "next story"?

Aelita posted a comment on Sunday 16th December 2007 4:57pm

Please, I would love to see the next part of the story, so please post it! I would like to read it for the sake of reading it!

Aelita posted a comment on Saturday 17th November 2007 4:29pm

I really love this story and i would love it if you put a conclusion up!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Friday 15th June 2007 11:20am

I liked it a lot. It's an interesting concept. I liked how Harry's robes sort of showed his mood, that was an interesting way to do it. I'm rambling. I'm going away now. I loved it.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Friday 15th June 2007 11:01am

Interesting. So it's Wormtail who finally kills Voldy. Fascinating. I like how Harry dealt with the whole situation, rising above it, not killing anyone. It's cool

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 11th June 2007 11:24pm

Yes, but can they do that? I don't think they'll be able to pull it off. Just a guess.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 7:39pm

Well that's interesting. I can't wait to see what comes of this. You never know, with an opening like that.

Saphimire posted a comment on Sunday 6th May 2007 10:04am

Are you going to post the fifth part? 'Cause I really like this idea you have. ^_^

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 12:32pm

wooooot!
yet again

ShadowNixxie posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 5:37pm

"Bugger," Harry swore with a frown, "That means I missed the match against Ravenclaw."

I can't believe that that's all he's worried about!!! *lol*