By Ruskbyte
Reviews
Terry Swain posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 1:02pm
Great story. nicely twisted. :)
Victor1 posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 7:24pm
wow this is a really intense story.
its really incredibly well written.
i cant really explain how im feeling into words because this is so damn good.
please please please update this soon
Taegeous posted a comment on Saturday 28th January 2006 7:36pm
Excellent story. I hope that those who betrayed Harry, shortly prior to their extermination, realize that they drove him to become what he is. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the story.
Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 4:55pm
This one is definitely disturbing. The others I could redeem. This one, while understandable, is far too dark. Unfortunately, the Dursleys reaped what they sowed - three fold or more. And Harry proves that the betrayal of the Wizarding world broke him and turned him into the one thing it feared most - a truly dark wizard.
I find this one sad more than anything, though. Yes, dark and disturbing, but sad because of exactly how much has been lost.
Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 4:42pm
Now this is an interesting chapter, almost more so than the previous three. For all that he hates and despises the Wizarding world, he remained there. He could have vanished, hidden himself away so completely that they would never find him and instead, he creates a mile-high tower in the center of Hogsmeade. Not only that but the symbolism, putting himself up above them, so high that they are mere ants to him - partly taking on deity styling and partly showing that he is superior to them. The mix of magic and technology is also interesting - the army of magical constructs that separate him from the world he was so abruptly ejected from and betrayed by. But he allows Dobby to stay - because Dobby never doubted him, never betrayed him. The only others who did not doubt or betray him are dead, his parents, Hagrid, and Sirius.
Is he still mad? In some ways yes, most definitely. But in others, I think he's become the most feared person of all, one who has nothing left to make him stay within the norms of society and social mores.
I'm definitely liking the complexity of this and the depth of the imagery. Still find it a bit frightening, especially the way he so naturally seems to have changed from the child wizard to the adult mage.
Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 4:18pm
A mad, insane, and immensely powerful Harry Potter is a very frightening thing. The interesting part is watching and seeing the slow realization of how badly he was betrayed by everyone around him - the Weasleys, Dumbledore, Hermione, and the Wizarding world in general. Still a very interesting piece, even if it is frightening. Though, I must admit, I am not sure if I am enjoying it or reading it to get to the end in the hopes of a bit of light at the end of the tunnel. I think, mostly, I'm reading because it is good enough to have caught my interest and because I can't stand not to know.
well done
Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 4:05pm
Interesting pov, dark and sad and so filled with anger. I've always wondered how Harry would be treated after he took care of Voldemort for the Wizarding World and this hits on far too many of the possibilities I've pondered. The way the wizards, who really should know better, seem to accept things at face value without investigating or double checking their facts is a terrifying thing. And the way they simply ignore laws and protections that have been around in the Muggle world for generations is even more so.
I do like how Harry manages to keep from harming the Muggle, even if he does scare him quite a bit. For all of his anger, he shows some restraint and some traces of the 'good' child he had been before the wizarding world betrayed him.
Thank you for sharing
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 12:00pm
This story seems somehow to have misplaced its Mature rating.
Rachel1 posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2006 2:59pm
This really is a great fic. I've read many Dark!Harry and Azkaban fics, this is by far the best one, I really hope you continue to update it.
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 5:14pm
ok, it's a disturbing tale but i hope you keep on until the end. don't stop now.
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 9:43pm
I really like this story. I am hoping that you'll update sometime soon. :)
Keep up the good work and update again soon.
GknightS posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 2:02am
hey.. nice story.. i really enjoyed it.. as crazy as that sounds.. but i really don't want Harry to end up with Hermiony.. i don't care what he does he her.. but i really would rather have Harry fall in love with a muggle girl that he for some reason can't just control and shag. and then a happy ending.. but what ever it is that you decide to do it's your story and it's all good..
i have some ideas.. you might or might not want to consider..
1. make Harry have a symbol.. a symbol that everyone will fear when seen.. not exactly following Voldemort's foot steps.. but something that represents his power..
2. if you want to consider the muggle girl idea i stated before then have her support him and love him.. so that he can come out of his insanity..
sincerely,
CL
Alex00 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 8:58pm
great story
James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 12:01am
Strange...deffinately strange, but good. You have protrayed an insane Harry in the best way I have ever seen. Keep it up.
James
anonymous posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 2:57pm
Original and brilliant. Please continue.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 3:28pm
Now *this* is what an Azkaban revengefic *should* be. :-)
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 1:20pm
I've only read the first chapter, but I just had to comment that this is a very powerful piece. I hope you keep the same POV for most of it.
Jon_Stroop posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 12:21pm
Wow. All I can say is, wow. This story is amazing. You capture the essence of insanity perfectly. Seriously kick ass. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Chris Williams posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 10:07am
Well I used to be a fan of your work. This fic has lost me.
jake m posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 9:03pm