mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 26th June 2007 7:12am for Breaking the Chains

Awesome. Yes, disturbing. I like it, it is a removal from what you normally do. You're depiction of Harry is stunning. I like how you wrote his thought process, it's perfect. He does seem insane. It's very hard to write stream of conciousness and think you've done a great job of it.

Saphimire posted a comment on Thursday 14th September 2006 4:06pm for Breaking the Chains

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WAHHHHHHHH!!!! Ah-hem.... Love the ending. Very
profound. *nod, nod*

Ben posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 1:51pm for Breaking the Chains

Awesome writing. I love your style--repeating things for emphasis. The way you allowed Harry's thoughts to stray really enhanced, and helped me invision, the fact that he is slowly making his way OUT of insanity.

Great stuff,

Ben

Ben posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 1:51pm for Breaking the Chains

Awesome writing. I love your style--repeating things for emphasis. The way you allowed Harry's thoughts to stray really enhanced, and helped me invision, the fact that he is slowly making his way OUT of insanity.

Great stuff,

Bem

Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 4:05pm for Breaking the Chains

Interesting pov, dark and sad and so filled with anger. I've always wondered how Harry would be treated after he took care of Voldemort for the Wizarding World and this hits on far too many of the possibilities I've pondered. The way the wizards, who really should know better, seem to accept things at face value without investigating or double checking their facts is a terrifying thing. And the way they simply ignore laws and protections that have been around in the Muggle world for generations is even more so.

I do like how Harry manages to keep from harming the Muggle, even if he does scare him quite a bit. For all of his anger, he shows some restraint and some traces of the 'good' child he had been before the wizarding world betrayed him.

Thank you for sharing

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 10th January 2006 12:00pm for Breaking the Chains

This story seems somehow to have misplaced its Mature rating.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 1:20pm for Breaking the Chains

I've only read the first chapter, but I just had to comment that this is a very powerful piece. I hope you keep the same POV for most of it.