pfeil posted a comment on Sunday 12th July 2009 1:43am for Reactions to Action

Yay, the planets. I actually just heard that live 2 weeks back, so I understood the reference this re-read.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2007 5:44pm for Reactions to Action

I may have reviewed this chapter before, but what the heck, here we go again.

I noticed one thing that *might* become a continuity error. In an earlier chapter Harry plans on issuing the plasma rifles to the drones as weapons, but in this chapter it's stated that the rifle's draw on the wizard's own magic to power them. Unless the drones' construction allows them to perform magic, I don't see how they would supply the necessary energy to make the rifles work.

No doubt you're tired of being asked, but is there *any* chance of this story being continued, if not y you then by someone else? With the dreadful ending of the series, every good H/Hr fan fic is to be treasured, and of all those incomplete ones I've read, this is still my favorite, Please, PLEASE continue!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2007 12:06am for Reactions to Action

Yay! Amazing as always.

Lewis posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2006 9:35pm for Reactions to Action

I'd like to think you read these. So I'm going to ask out of the kindness of your heart will you please come back. In my time spent in the Fan fiction world, the have been very few stories that I've grow so attached to as this one. I realise that you are a very busy man, but please I love this story. I really do. It's like the books in fan fiction form. If it helps you have a following and we adore and admire you and your talent to the fullest extent. Thanks and have a nice day!

Meg posted a comment on Thursday 20th July 2006 7:53pm for Reactions to Action

I love this story so much, I'm reading it through again. :D

However, I think I found an error. In "Mixed Reactions", Harry calls Hermione both "Mione" and "Nee". Hermione also thinks how her parents call her "Mione". In this chapter, you say she hates it and one of her Muggle Aunts calls her that.

Sorry if someone pointed that out already, but it niggled at me.

Other than that, I'm sorry I only have ONE MORE chapter to reread, and I really look forward to more.

Thanks,

Meg

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 8:15pm for Reactions to Action

Most interesting Snape-apology session.

If Harry isn't treated better than that at his meeting with the Board, it will be a travesty of justice.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 10:02pm for Reactions to Action

OK. A difficult chapter. To Plan, to write, to keep track of all the inuendoes. The personallity changes in Harry are difficult to understand until reminded about the "other Harry" and his reactions. I am so glad Draco is not going to get off scot-free. Also ditto Crabbe and Goyle. Snape's apology was what Harry said. "An insensire apology is not apology at all"! A good chapter though. Thanks for writing. pms

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 30th March 2006 11:01am for Reactions to Action

Glad to see that you've updated this story. Correct me if I am wrong, but aren't we about ready for a new chapter? Great work with the story up to this point. So, what are you going to do about Harry's feedbacks? Is he going to become bi-polar? How much of a strain is this going to put on his & hermione's growing relationship? Are you going to try & work Horcruxes into this, or just go with the ideas you've already established? The questions are endless & I can't wait to see how it all plays out!

Faith1 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th March 2006 5:42pm for Reactions to Action

OMG! I'm loving this, but I NEED more! I LOVVVE H/Hr... so that's funny. Now the question is.... who's Ron's?

-Faith

Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 5:24pm for Reactions to Action

Ooooh, Nice chapter! I expecally liked Luna's use of rock cakes ^.^

I'm still not getting an update alert for your story though

{tear}

gonekrazy3000 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 11:07am for Reactions to Action

Oh My God....... I Love this story. I love you too(in a friendly way).
This has got to be one of the most unique and well written Fanfics i have ever read. Please complete this story. Don't EVER abandon it. I beg you this 1 thing......

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 11:59am for Reactions to Action

Another good chapter.

As expected, nothing happened in the shower.

I assume we'll know in the next chapter if Draco is gone at this point or not. I rather expect a violent reaction from him when he learns he's suspended. Are they going to call the aurors in to arrest him?

Nice little mystery about those letters.

Looking forward to more,

Tom A.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 11:43am for Reactions to Action

A good look at the consequences of the last few chapters. The effects of the feedback are getting somewhat worrisome. That's the kind of thing that would make confiding in the Headmaster advisable, but I'm not at all certain that Harry will see it that way. This roller-coaster is getting to be quite an addictive ride.

Musta posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 8:31am for Reactions to Action

Aegnor Alkarin, Earl of Unfinishedshire, bids thee welcome to AUland, where the Great Golden Monarch Ruskbyte rules with a fair but firm fist. The Monarch bids thee feast on his wry wit, his stunning segues, and his inimitably iniquitous depictions of sheer literary genius. He asks that thou dost leave comments on his writing, and give him pats on the back, but not to hesitate to give constructive criticism. The Golden Monarch also wishes to thank you for reading his wonderful pieces of writing, and hope that you come again sometime.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 1:17am for Reactions to Action

this is a thoroughly enjoyable story - in the original and this tighter version. I am looking forward eagerly to each new chapter.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 12:21am for Reactions to Action

I totally love this story, though I am a bit confused as to why it is behind the one you posted at ff.net. Anyway, I look forward to the next new chapter.

AK posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 10:13pm for Reactions to Action

Hey nice chapter one request thow, when u get that prompt to send mail alerts can you check it? that way we know when u update?
Oh and are you just reposting or are you going to continue this?

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 5:34pm for Reactions to Action

O.K. don't add any more girlfriends to harry for this story. It work with just him and hermione, how many combant drones are you going to have harry make.

Mary Morley posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 8:58am for Reactions to Action

I am really enjoying this. Are you planning on finishing it?