Steven Augart posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 12:28am for Disembarking

This is another exciting chapter that moves the story along nicely.

I despise Snape; I can't believe his treatment in DH. So I like the Snape-bashing in this chapter.

It's a nice dramatic touch to end the chapter with the speech by "Doppleganger Unit One", which thereupon tells us, the readers, that there is at lest one Doppleganger Unit, and that this is why Harry's emotions have been so flat.

Nit(s):

You write "it's" in several places where you want the possessive "its".

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 1:59pm for Disembarking

Hehe, yay. This is so fun!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 7:58am for Disembarking

I'm not exactly sure why, but the Doppelganger reporting in struck me as hysterical. Harry the Automaton was just that.

Now on to figure out the "Father" stuff.

Captivating tale.

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 29th March 2006 1:35am for Disembarking

OK! Harry is obviously a super Harry and has a substitute filling in for him. Now how and why and what is going to happen now? Who gets to explain to Snape that Harry didn't throw him over the Hufflepuff table? Looking forward to more of this. Thanks for writing. pms

Aurilia posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 3:57pm for Disembarking

Squeeing giggle.

Mars Bars? Snicker.

Lovin' it!