Backwards Compatible

I enjoy the train scenes. "... will result in my being required to kill you."
Your Malfoy is so despicable, it's very satisfying to read about Bad Things happening to him.

I'll cover a nit or nits here:

You write:

identical to how he had appear

You want "appeared", not "appear".


You write: "leaned in close to hissed". I suggest "leaned in close to him and hissed"

You write:

looking completely unruffled as not in the slightest bit perturbed by what had just transpired

I think that instead of "as", you want "as if" or "and".

You write:

Ministry Crew --as the other members of the DA were want to refer to the six students

You want "wont" instead of "want".

Oh dear, here comes the real Harry. Don't worry, that's about as far as I remember at this point. Yay for this story.

Wow, what is Harry, a Terminator? Maybe the next chapter will reveal. Interesting story.

Your Harry-the-Automaton is unnerving even me. No wonder Hermione is beside herself over Harry's current state of "existence."

I cannot see where you are going in the least.

Great low-grade suspense.

OK! Harry is in bad shape. What is going on? This is a little unnerving. Answers?
Hopefully soon. Thanks, pms

I'm really glad there's another chapter, otherwise I would have been forced to unleash the assassin bunnies.

I'm really glad there's another chapter, otherwise I would have been forced to unleash the assassin bunnies.

Yah for Harry breaking Malfoy's arm. Although a matched set of broken noses would have been nice.