Backwards Compatible

This is another exciting chapter that moves the story along nicely.

I despise Snape; I can't believe his treatment in DH. So I like the Snape-bashing in this chapter.

It's a nice dramatic touch to end the chapter with the speech by "Doppleganger Unit One", which thereupon tells us, the readers, that there is at lest one Doppleganger Unit, and that this is why Harry's emotions have been so flat.

Nit(s):

You write "it's" in several places where you want the possessive "its".

Hehe, yay. This is so fun!

Ok, I have absolutely no idea what's going on. Harry in a Hawaiin shirt? Now that's just bizarre.
Maybe the next chapter will clear this up...

I'm not exactly sure why, but the Doppelganger reporting in struck me as hysterical. Harry the Automaton was just that.

Now on to figure out the "Father" stuff.

Captivating tale.

OK! Harry is obviously a super Harry and has a substitute filling in for him. Now how and why and what is going to happen now? Who gets to explain to Snape that Harry didn't throw him over the Hufflepuff table? Looking forward to more of this. Thanks for writing. pms

Squeeing giggle.

Mars Bars? Snicker.

Lovin' it!