Backwards Compatible
By Ruskbyte
Haven't actually read the chapter yet, but I have something I don't want to forget to say. Harry's turning into Gatsby, calling Ron "old friend" all the time. Gatsby always called Nick "old sport." Just something facinating I noticed.
I like the reference to "Asterix and the Chieftain's Shield"
Bad part of story. And it's going to get worse, right? Ok, on to Harry's rescue. Please make it swift and I hope the drones can protect Hermione's parents.
Looking forward to the resolution of this situation.
Thanks for writing, pms
So, obviously you're still alive and all. But it is troubling that the last update to the story on FF.net was in July of 05. Is there more to the story that wasn't posted there?
Or is this a horrible horrible tease?
I hope that we get more than the posted 18 parts, it IS a very good story.
Horay for Power-Trip!Harry! And I almost feel sorry for Lucius. Almost.
I like it! Now that I have finished reading the first 14 chapters, I'd like to review.
The dark (but not necessarily evil) Harry is a refreshing twist. As a former soldier, I understand that, while ugly, nasty, wrong, bad, terrible, and probably criminal, it is often necessary to fight
terorists with the same weapon they use...TERROR.
While I really don't care for 'SuperHarry!' stories, I feel this one has great potential. Harry is not suprepowered, he is merely using advanced technology. Better tools.
Heinlein says 'Sufficently advanced technology as indistinguishable from magic.'
Harry is driven by the memories he has of his friends fate, along with that of the wizarding world. He is still wracked with guilt for his actions and those he percieves as his, but all the same, he
is willing to get ugly as needed. JKR was really cruel to put the destiny of a fickle, uncaring population of idiots in the hands of a young man.
Your explainations are very well written, your descriptions a bit lacking, and dialogue sounds like real people are speaking. Over all, well done. I have gotten several interesting ideas for my
ilustrations. Mayhaps I can do some from this story.
Harry's treatment of the ferret and his bookends is brilliant. I cannot wait to find out how nasty he is when he deals with Lucky Lucy and gang. Please update this soon. Alorkin
You are evil! Leaving a cliffhanger there!
Great chapter. Excellent build up, and tension.
I'm glad of Harry's reaction to his torchure of Draco. Not that Draco didn't deserve it.
Great story. Eagerly waiting the next thrilling installment!
Tom A.
if harry doesnt get there in time and she is well raped then you may just ruin the story we have all been reading..
Such a good ciffy to end with. A good bit of story development here that was quite enjoyable. Somehow I don't think either of the Malfoy males are going to enjoy the next chapter; though Draco admittedly did not enjoy the end of this one - it's hell when your target doesn't respond like you expect him to.
Cliffhanger!! ARGL!!!
all else is very well, I realy love the story. Even if it is a HHr.
Very well done.
this is a great story but it is absolutely evil to cut the chapter there, i hope you update soon like today.
you better write more damit!
I really dispise cliffies . . . I dispise them with a vengeance . . . good story so far!
Wow, the Malfoys, both of them, really need to die. Doesn't have to be painful or anything, just really soon.
That was a increbibly long chapter, but some parts were a bit... much. Not that I don't mind the angst! I love the angst! If you put it as Herm getting...raped, which is a sensitive issue on its own, maybe you should intert a warning. Well, keep it up! It's a brilliant story!
DAMN DAMN DAMN!!!!! A cliffie like this is just flat out EVIL! I hope you hurry with the next installment!
glad you are posting it, and rereading it is a blast :-)


Aaaack, poor Hermione. Harry's going to whoop Lucius's ass, along with all the other Death Munchers. It'll be awesome. I can't wait to read on.